Tell me something
everything
anything!
Tell me heroic stories from your past
when you slayed dragons
won many hearts
or learnt to play the guitar
Tell me of places, so far away,
where the earth never touches the sky
Tell me of mountains, of fountains ,of castles so high
Tell me with poetry
Tell me with words
Tell me with songs
Tell me with music
Tell me with paintings
Tell me with sculptures
Tell me any way you see descriptive
Tell me how my eyes are like heaven
Tell me how beautiful I am
Tell me how proud I should be
Tell me you miss me
Tell me you love me
Tell me you want me
Tell me you need me
I don't want to talk about yesterday
And tomorrow makes me cry
So tonight
all I want you to do is
hold me in your arms
and tell me - no - promise me
you'll just try!
Inspired by the love story of a close friend
everything
anything!
Tell me heroic stories from your past
when you slayed dragons
won many hearts
or learnt to play the guitar
Tell me of places, so far away,
where the earth never touches the sky
Tell me of mountains, of fountains ,of castles so high
Tell me with poetry
Tell me with words
Tell me with songs
Tell me with music
Tell me with paintings
Tell me with sculptures
Tell me any way you see descriptive
Tell me how my eyes are like heaven
Tell me how beautiful I am
Tell me how proud I should be
Tell me you miss me
Tell me you love me
Tell me you want me
Tell me you need me
I don't want to talk about yesterday
And tomorrow makes me cry
So tonight
all I want you to do is
hold me in your arms
and tell me - no - promise me
you'll just try!
Inspired by the love story of a close friend
Comments
the words were nice, although i think going for more consistency in pace was needed
'or learnt to play the guitar' just seemed out there, would've been better off if you continued with...
when u wrote words, when u played song, when u sang love....etc
like the three lines before it.
tab3an the above comment is how i perceive the words in stories of old 1- when u slayed dragon and won hearts,3 played guitar
while u could easily have meant
stories of old, 1- when u slayed dragon, 2- won hearts. 3 played guitar
:D